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    dots Submission Name: Prayer for Humanities Chastisement dots
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    Author: DorianGrymstone
    ASL Info:    23/male/West Hills
    Elite Ratio:    1.65 - 8/10/11
    Words: 216
    Class/Type: Misc/Angry
    Total Views: 58
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    You speak sweet sorrowful words into the minds of the unaware, yet I say preach on mocking bird you can’t infect me, prey for deliverance from this mortal nightmare and save thyn self from damnation, your prayers for aided prosperity, your lies to all, your false hope, your need for materialistic possessions, your need to quench your thirst for power, your love for war and killing and destruction, I prey you fall to hell where you find your own denial, let it tear apart your insides, may the realization of your own mortality destroy your very soul, may the weight of your own guilt crush every bone in your body, may the pain of a thousand tortured souls be your everyday, may the end come soon, may it be as pitiless as it’s been told, let hell reign over thyn world and show you what true pain and affliction are, may eternity bring you unimaginable suffering let it able you to feel the torture of being caught in a world of dumb-founded dip-shits that know nothing of what is real, may you all realize your own inanity and credulity, “and I pray it brutalizes your souls just as much as it has mine, I pray that your chastisement comes soon and you’re no more!”




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