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    dots Submission Name: amanda (revised)dots
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    Author: pipesmcgavin
    ASL Info:    27/m/DC
    Elite Ratio:    0.89 - 0/2/8
    Words: 333
    Class/Type: Poetry/Sorry
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    that rocket sailed into the heavens
    i wonder what he saw as he rose
    the sun twelve minutes past meridian
    and not a cloud in the blue sky
    and he arched back down to earth
    from zenith to nadir,
    nadeer,
    nathir
    along gravity's inevitable rainbow
    i wonder what he saw then
    the brown horizon
    that gray blemish our camp
    and did he see you?
    a sand, at first, on the beach
    growing bigger, and bigger, and bigger
    but really, i want to know, did you see him?
    did you?
    out of the corner of your eye
    the reflection on his aluminum jacket
    a glint from the blue as time stood still?
    did you see the needle from heaven
    that brought you down to hell?
    i'm sorry i wasn't more help that day
    baby, you had me at a loss
    when i held you
    you were upside down
    and your eyes were open
    did you see me?





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