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    dots Submission Name: The Stormdots
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    Author: Frank Maguire
    ASL Info:    57 / UK
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 1846/1390/288
    Words: 202
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    Average Vote:    4.0000
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       So beautiful, yet destructive.


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    dotsThe Stormdots
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    Flowers bow, and form a shroud
    Birds no longer sing out loud
    Sun falls deep behind a cloud
    There’s a storm that’s coming soon

    Cats and dogs, they cease to roam
    Mothers call their children home
    Katie Ellie and Jerome
    Now the storm is almost here

    Clouds are dark, and gather tight
    Day it seems, has turned to night
    Wind it blows with all its might
    As the storm arrives at last

    Trees they buckle, as they sway
    Leaves and branches blow away
    Waves they crash around the bay
    As the storm it rages so

    Rain it lashes, strong and true
    Rivers run both old and new
    Floods they come from out the blue
    As the storm it peaks so well

    Thunder bellows, children cry
    Lightening lights up all the sky
    Sirens flash and pass on by
    Now the storm has won the day

    Winds abate, the sky is clear
    Many rainbows now appear
    The song of birds again we hear
    As the storm it blows on by

    Cats and dogs they roam again
    Children play out in the den
    Oblivious to where or when
    The storm it will return








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      I love storms and I love this poem. It neatly wraps up all that a storm brings and the feeling created is that which a storm creates, havoc and renewed peace. It flows perfectly and is yet another great piece from one of my favourite elite poets.
    | Posted on 2012-02-06 00:00:00 | by stormyskies | [ Reply to This ]
      Excellent! Your poem artfully creates the mood of awe, caution, and pandemonium that a storm brings! I sometimes think that God doesn't truly get the respect he deserves until he confronts us with a storm, and makes all of mans monuments seem like mere trifles by comparison!

    Excellent, and a delight to read, as all of your work is!
    | Posted on 2008-07-04 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      very well written, I very much enjoyed this.
    | Posted on 2008-07-01 00:00:00 | by DorianGrymstone | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a great poem, it makes me think of some of the wicked storms we've had pass thru Southern Illinois. Awesome!
    | Posted on 2008-07-01 00:00:00 | by whiteangel | [ Reply to This ]
      I completely adore this. I love the way it just reads so fluently and the rhymes so simple yet meaningful.
    | Posted on 2008-06-30 00:00:00 | by HimeManko | [ Reply to This ]


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