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    dots Submission Name: Summer Narrativedots
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    Author: EEKS
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    dotsSummer Narrativedots
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    Lately I've been reading and rereading the suicide letter of Hunter S. Thompson
    No more games.
    No more bombs.
    One sister is depressed and one sister is busted open.
    I have eaten all the crackers in the house
    and now I have to starve until Monday.
    But thats ok because I am almost too tired
    to get up and walk to the fridge anyway.

    Clothes have been piling up on my bed.
    I have more t-shirts than anyone I know.
    I have green ones, white ones, red ones, mostly black ones.
    On top of the pile is the latest Rolling Stone.
    Maybe I will read it later.
    Maybe I will stop breathing.
    I can never tell the future, its a mystery to me.

    My friends have jobs, I have responsibility.
    I've watched more movies this summer
    than all the summers past combined.
    I feel summer. Go figure.
    I am much more a fan of fall.
    Fall, fall, falling in love.
    I met him in Spring but tornadoes and bugs come in Spring so Spring can never be my favorite.
    His birthday is July 11.
    I have no idea what to get him.
    I have no money.

    Maybe he wants t-shirts.




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