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    dots Submission Name: Fe, fi, fo, fumdots
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    Author: iamthedreamer
    ASL Info:    18/F/NONYA
    Elite Ratio:    2.56 - 2/2/2
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Prose/Misc
    Total Views: 67
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 520



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       A normal day when my little brother is around...


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    dotsFe, fi, fo, fumdots
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    Fe, fi, fo, fum,
    I smell a little brother!

    I hear the shreikingof his six-year-old voice,
    see a flash of his very curly brown hair,
    I lie in wait of his passing by me,
    he screams like a girl as I jump out at him,
    taking him down in a flurry of giggles
    as I tickle him to the point peeing his pants,
    and after much struggling he barely escapes
    my tickling fingers and hands.

    Fe, fi, fo, fum,
    he didn't smell his big sister.




    Submitted on 2008-06-30 21:10:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      LOL, this is a really cute poem!
    | Posted on 2008-07-01 00:00:00 | by whiteangel | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh this is so great. I'm a big sister to a 6 year old to, I can so relate. >.> You love them, you wanna tickle to death... sometimes literally. lol I loved this, except I felt it ended early almost. You could have done more, possibly. Unless, this is what you aim for. If so, I lurvs it ever so much!

    x3
    | Posted on 2008-07-01 00:00:00 | by RulerxTaki | [ Reply to This ]



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