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    dots Submission Name: Photos Of A Remenissiondots
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    Author: Crestfallenman
    ASL Info:    21/M/CA
    Elite Ratio:    4.7 - 593/819/331
    Words: 260
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsPhotos Of A Remenissiondots
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    Ocean waves crashing,
    Against the ocean walls.
    The sun takes a swim into the water,
    Images are now created.
    As the weather changes,
    And time just continues to feel as it's slipping,
    Slipping away beyond my control.
    The feelings that I have deep inside,
    The feelings that were growing,
    When this heart was whole,
    Now is sedated from what I romanticise,
    In a formal unpleasant fashion,
    Slightly noticeable by self,
    Yet strongly acquitted by the misery it sheds.
    Most call this disease as to cliché,
    Though it was not a lie, that it hurts so bad.

    Life was so beautiful,
    You were the bristles that painted dreams,
    You were the energy that light the sun,
    Taking every gray away,
    Now the regret comes creeping its way in,
    As I face it to the reality.

    Some happy stories end with very sad endings,
    As sometimes love for each other does wilt away.
    But for the better, my love still burns,
    From the day your eyes struck mine.
    Now as we live in a permanent situation,
    A second chance at this is far from impossible,
    My life will just have to continue from here,
    And I will just have to keep everything between us,
    To remain always inside of the past.

    Oh, if it could be as easy as to say.

    The sun has settled,
    The night has came to rest the day asleep.
    Good-night my dear,
    Good-bye,
    Heather,
    You were the love of my life,
    You will always be that love in my life.


    Good-bye...




    Submitted on 2008-06-30 22:47:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      if this is your experience and not a tell of a possible situation, my heartfelt condolences I offer you.
    I thought your first two lines were quite poetic..
    I could see that the ocean is nothing but a large aquarium. So it is with lines 3 and four. I had never thought of the Sun taking a dip.
    i like the write, it gives me phrases and mental pictures that I can float around in.
    | Posted on 2008-07-01 00:00:00 | by realpoet | [ Reply to This ]


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