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    dots Submission Name: A Goth and his Queendots
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    Author: HimeManko
    ASL Info:    19/F/PA
    Elite Ratio:    0.44 - 6/3/16
    Words: 270
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
    Total Views: 61
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    dotsA Goth and his Queendots
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    Ontop a smooth cement wall
    There are names written in green
    One that tell a beautiful story
    Of a goth and his queen
    Two distant lovers
    Brought together on a rainy day
    Never know they were destined
    To end up this way
    Starting out with a whole heart
    Never knowing by the day
    That there love
    Slowly chipped away
    From snowy days to spring nights
    They did loves serenade
    From summer nights to fall days
    That love grew so then went to fade
    He grew up way to fast
    She grew up way to slow
    Oppsites ussuley attact
    But not in this lovers show
    One day he finnaly gave up
    Saying for the best
    Never knowing
    She wasn't like the rest
    Weeks went by
    Till he asked to see her once more
    Two differnt people now
    Not the same kids as before
    His hair now black as midnight
    His eyes a distant stare
    He fell into a depressed state
    What a burden he seemed to bare
    She was now more snappy
    And her arms filled with scars she tried to hide
    It seemed the side he came to love
    Had fell of the earth and died
    His darker personality
    Made her feel not as bad
    And her scars he seen
    Made him feel not as sad
    Slowly they started to see each other
    Just a little bit more
    And slowly his goth personality along with her bitter self
    Fell to the floor
    Theres no real end to this story
    Cause happily ever afters are only in dreams
    So this is the unended story
    Of a goth and his queen




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