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    dots Submission Name: Calming the Nervesdots
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    Author: realpoet
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    Words: 175
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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    dotsCalming the Nervesdots
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    When you feel the pressure of the day
    running like a lion after prey
    make believe you've caught the prize
    and now you're feasting on Big Mac and fries.

    Calm your nerves by panting like dog
    to loosen those muscles around the tum,
    make yourself croak like a frog
    to burp up that carbon gas, then hum.

    You don't believe it is the truth !
    Try it, there's nothing to lose
    except you may look so uncouth,
    but who cares, it is your choose.

    It's better to be unnerved
    than to have the jitters;
    it's your body that is served
    to relieve that which is bitter.

    Go ahead ! Perform the stunt ,
    it takes but a moment or so,
    It's better to laugh than to grunt;
    you will find it's a good thing to know.

    Go ahead ! Pounce the day !
    act like a dog !
    Croak like a frog !
    It's a nice treat to give your day.







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