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    dots Submission Name: warning of countless agesdots
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    Author: iaida
    ASL Info:    20/m/chicago
    Elite Ratio:    2.12 - 82/85/201
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 65
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    dotswarning of countless agesdots
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    the circle
    realigns
    the way... we dance
    its simple
    the signs
    seem to give us a second chance

    demonstrate
    what we learned in waves
    consentrate
    on countless days

    for all the gold, you cant give in
    to break the bold,
    they'll surely win
    just finish us
    and we will be you
    just guide us
    and we'll worship you

    said we'd make use of our feet
    to jump ear to ear
    to go far off to be obsolete
    says we wont dare

    but if we'd triumph, over imaginary lines
    then perhaps we could jump
    and live our forgotten lives.




    Submitted on 2008-07-01 07:32:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      DUDE, YES!!! GAVE ME CHILLS!
    | Posted on 2008-07-01 00:00:00 | by DorianGrymstone | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a pretty cool poem, I especially like the last line! Keep up the good work!
    | Posted on 2008-07-01 00:00:00 | by whiteangel | [ Reply to This ]



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