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    dots Submission Name: Freedomdots
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    Author: Lilyan
    ASL Info:    1 Elite Years
    Elite Ratio:    2.56 - 42/38/26
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 320
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 496



    Description:
       My thoughts again, i don't know where they come, they just do


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    dotsFreedomdots
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    Is it freedom
    when you have wings to fly?
    Is it freedom
    when you will never die?
    Is it freedom
    when don't have to worry?
    Is it freedom
    when life don't seem so blurry?
    A freedom it is,
    when life seems just happy
    A feedom it is,
    when life isn't something scrappy
    A freedom it is
    when closeones are so near
    A freedom it is
    when there's no big fear.






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    ||| Comments |||
      Nice poem, nice pic, almost greating card like.


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    | Posted on 2008-07-02 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]


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