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    dots Submission Name: "Cat Scratches"dots
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    Author: DiamondTears
    ASL Info:    16/F/Wa
    Elite Ratio:    3.36 - 61/97/48
    Words: 53
    Class/Type: Poetry/Cutting or Mutilation
    Total Views: 150
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    dots"Cat Scratches"dots
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    Neat little lines of self hatred,
    Spewed on my flesh.
    They spit fire up my arms,
    Searing Sweetness, stretch to see the red.
    "Cat scratches." I say with a smile.
    Scars, my secret metals of another hurtle jumped.
    Make my skin burn and bite,
    So my heart can recover from a bitter world.




    Submitted on 2008-07-01 13:13:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This was written well. I liked the short blutness of it. I'm a former cutter myself and I too, at first, claied cat scratches. Till the cat's claws got too long to be believed. This hit close to home because I am a former cutter. I know the deep, inner pain that out weighs any physical wound. I often crave the endorphines now, but its not healthy. If ever you need an ear to listen, my are quite keen. Keep up the awesome work, and I'll keep reading

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    | Posted on 2008-07-01 00:00:00 | by MinervaBlu | [ Reply to This ]
      That's a real intense poem. I like it a lot. Great imagery, I could imagine a pretty girl smiling and saying, "cat scratches." Really good stuff. I can relate to it a whole lot. Keep writing Diamond tears, you've got talent.

    Take it easy.
    | Posted on 2008-07-01 00:00:00 | by Sirbongatron | [ Reply to This ]



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