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    dots Submission Name: Crystal Tearsdots
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    Author: Black Angel
    ASL Info:    15/F/Tx
    Elite Ratio:    1.94 - 12/78/71
    Words: 141
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
    Total Views: 82
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 891



    Description:
       Alrighty, the girl killed her self, not the person abusing her, just so you know.


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    dotsCrystal Tearsdots
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    She hid away her crystal tears
    In a heart shaped box
    She wished upon a star
    As the last gem dropped
    Her heart and soul was gone
    As she tucked the box away
    That was her peaceful retreat
    So she would never go astray

    She hid away the bruises
    Under make-up and cloths
    She cursed under her breath
    As she felt the last blow
    The feeling and pain vanished
    As she lathered the make-up on
    This was her mask
    So no one would ever know

    She hid away her thoughts
    In a jornal on her bed
    She sighed in regret
    As she wrote the last thing she said
    Her mind and dreams thrashed away
    As she forgot what the words she wrote
    This was her final justice
    This was the final blow

    Bang~








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