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    dots Submission Name: Here and Nowdots
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    Author: BestxDeceptions
    ASL Info:    18, Female, Kentucky.
    Elite Ratio:    2.4 - 22/49/41
    Words: 112
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsHere and Nowdots
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    If the world made sense
    there wouldn't be
    the one that always seems a little too
    distant.

    There wouldn't be
    that one guy that you needed
    when you have always
    been ok alone.

    If you could make sense of things,
    then life would be simple.
    But that's just,
    way to easy.

    My life
    or yours.

    We were meant
    to live like this.
    But sometimes,
    I wonder how it will all

    work out.

    If I knew
    where I would be in
    ten years
    I probably wouldn't care.

    But here I am.

    If the world made sense,
    we would all go
    insane.





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      If the world made sense I would shed tears of joy! I never would have thought ten years ago I'd be a bum reading people's poetry. You write a lot about these guys in your life. At least they do something good for you (inspire you) other than breaking your heart (definitley not good).
    | Posted on 2008-08-08 00:00:00 | by ArchusMuta | [ Reply to This ]


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