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    dots Submission Name: Just Becausedots
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    Author: EEKS
    Elite Ratio:    2.84 - 647/1072/602
    Words: 194
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
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    dotsJust Becausedots
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    I love you because you don't care what your shoes look like
    You never mind switching clothes with me
    and when you send me pictures of yourself naked
    you are always staring directly at the camera, unashamed and eager
    When I reciprocate, my cheeks are always blushing, and I almost always cut my eyes out of the shot
    I can't help it, I always look afraid

    You and I made our own special place, down the secret steps to Narnia
    and only you and I know what the words mean painted into the caved in brick building
    on our favorite rooftop
    down the road from our secret place

    You played with me; I was a faerie and you were a hiker
    You found me and we had love on a metal lounge chair long forgotten in a newly made forest
    I know all your passwords and you know most of my secrets
    You know I trade one bad habit for another
    And I know have bad taste in girl musicians

    I love you because you know me and it doesn't freak you out
    Really I love you just because




    Submitted on 2008-07-02 02:29:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Just because its so sweet, I like it
    personal poetry, can it get any better.


    The Poor Man's Poet.
    | Posted on 2008-07-02 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]


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