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    dots Submission Name: A Call to the Worlddots
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    Author: KasPeR88
    Elite Ratio:    3.05 - 30/51/31
    Words: 595
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsA Call to the Worlddots
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    I feel like I'm living a dream constantly,
    And, as time has passed, I've started to live properly.

    No more drinking that poison that'll mess with your mind,
    Or weaken your belief system - I've perfected mine.

    Now I know who I am, and I'll never again need to hide,
    'Cause I see the truth, and it came from inside,

    Shot at me in a bolt of fear and pollution;
    The suffering that'll spark the inevitable revolution,

    And I look forward to what's coming now and then,
    'Cause I have foreseen the beginning of the end,

    The beginning of the end of the hatred and the pain,
    The fluoridation of the water that'll scramble your brain,

    The medicine that'll eventually get you mentally lazy,
    The spiritual uprising, for every hero they drove crazy.

    Don't you see this now, England? We're sick; extremely sick.
    AIDS has swept the planet since it was constructed at Fort Detrick,

    And I've found myself trapped, desperate for you to see,
    All the shit my own leaders have forced upon me,

    And you, your family, everywhere you've ever been,
    Your friends, and pretty much everyone you've ever seen.

    Don't you see where these technological "advancements" are gunna take us?
    They're already using TETRA masts to take over our minds and break us.

    It's right nearby you. Accept the chip in the card and you'll accept it inside you.
    It's all around you, and I still can't believe this is fine by you.

    Bilderberg are meeting secretly annually,
    And they're silencing dissent with weapons based on frequency.

    Billions are going to fight for their own slavery through war,
    And as the streets break out into chaos and they implement martial law,

    Because people have believed myths about how to get into heaven,
    And how the officials say the day went down from that morning on seven/seven.

    They'll have no problem being made to believe that what they're doing's right,
    Playing into the hands of the Illuminati; strengthening their world army's might.

    I'm telling you this is deeper than the drones you see on television,
    Going on, warning us about invisible terrorism.

    Private military contractors bank off you and me,
    And the Bill of Rights may as well just state that we're no longer free,

    I see the work of true evil in all superstate formation,
    The Kissinger blueprint for mass depopulation,
    The queen and how she's tied in with the freemasons,
    The global warming hoax that's shaking every single nation,

    I hope you'll come to see, even if it is a little late,
    You can't erase what's happened, but you can determine your own fate.

    I am the voice of the youth of today,
    Giving in to carelessness, too confused to find their way.

    I am the vision of the freedom fighters of this age,
    Even those that have died, and those consumed by rage.

    I am the people standing up for the truth.
    I am the investigator that requires every last bit of proof.

    I am a cause; the meaning of life you never knew.
    I am humanity, and I am suffering... So are you.

    So, I think, to end this thing, I better leave you with a speech, right?
    I think you're better off using the forgotten gift of foresight.

    It's easy to regain when you really open up your mind.
    You will be who you are - Those who seek the truth, shall find.




    Submitted on 2008-07-02 17:14:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      You had a lot of illuminating facts/conspiracy theories that you incorporated smoothly into the rhyme scheme. And I think the rhyme scheme could easily be put to a beat and made into a rap. It reminds me a lot of Immortal Technique, if you have ever listened to him. My favorite part is:
    "I see the work of true evil in all superstate formation,
    The Kissinger blueprint for mass depopulation,
    The queen and how she's tied in with the freemasons,
    The global warming hoax that's shaking every single nation"

    You poured a lot of images into this poem, and did research for it too. Much props for that. Love political poems, and this is another intriguing one from start to finish.

    Take it easy! Keep writing!
    | Posted on 2008-07-02 00:00:00 | by Sirbongatron | [ Reply to This ]


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