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    dots Submission Name: Truther Versus Trutherdots
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    Author: KasPeR88
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    Words: 221
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    dotsTruther Versus Trutherdots
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    We're winning the info war and we're beating at the walls,
    Standing on our own two feet and doing right by our cause,
    And we'll proudly watch them break down as their empire falls,
    'Cause these disinfo junkies in the government are passing fascist laws!

    One day, the UK will stand in honour of those we've lost,
    And the USA will band together in understanding of what's to come.
    Independent freedom fighters push for truth at any cost,
    As the criminals start to regret all that they've ever done.

    Until then, though, we need to open our eyes.
    We're being turned on one another by a series of lies.
    Fucked, once again, by the secretive guys...

    I'm seeing truther versus truther and it's hard to comprehend.
    It's like giving away something you that desperately need;
    A war against yourself; a friend against a friend;
    Cutting your wrists open, and letting yourself bleed.

    Once again, let's come together in everything that we stand for,
    And bring the truth to the light, once and for all.
    We have to end all the bickering that they have planned for,
    The attacks on the truth movement; the rise, then the fall.

    Until then, though, we need to pull ourselves together,
    Stop fighting with our allies and start thinking about forever.




    Submitted on 2008-07-02 17:14:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      The idea of this piece is a little convaluted. It hits the main point of opposing points pushing truth, but the main theme seems to just really get lost in an unknown propoganda attempt.
    | Posted on 2008-07-02 00:00:00 | by jayisademon | [ Reply to This ]


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