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    dots Submission Name: Returning to the Bladedots
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    Author: xXTorn2piecesxX
    ASL Info:    16/f/PA
    Elite Ratio:    4.2 - 2/4/10
    Words: 85
    Class/Type: Misc/Cutting or Mutilation
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    Bytes: 461



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    dotsReturning to the Bladedots
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    As the time goes by
    I thought you loved me 4 me
    And all I realized now is I
    Misjudged you…I love you
    But your driving me insane.
    I think I’m going 2 get that blade
    And start all over again
    See the blood drip makes
    The pain go away…
    why would you ask me 2 quit when u knew
    You would be the one to just make me start again.
    I fucking love you but do you want this to be the end.




    Submitted on 2008-07-02 18:44:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is trite, and unoriginal. I would overhaul this piece.
    | Posted on 2008-07-03 00:00:00 | by jayisademon | [ Reply to This ]



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