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    My Heart.


    My heart aches and my heart cries and my heart bleeds.

    It aches because I want us to be together and know it wont happen.

    It cries because at times we can be sooo similar and not be what I want us to be.

    It bleeds because the love that’s in my heart for you it infinite meaning that every ounce of love that bleeds is automatically replenished with the thought of your beautiful voice face and personality.




    Submitted on 2008-07-02 19:11:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I just really can't dig this piece. It seems really repetative and uninspired. You could do a lot more with this.
    | Posted on 2008-07-03 00:00:00 | by jayisademon | [ Reply to This ]



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