Description: We shouldn't have to build robots, there are human beings who choose that life every day.
last mind standing -------------------------------------------
In pairs they walk by
Silent
With forgetful eyes
True to their nature
They pay no mind
To the homeless
The sick
The abused and unrefined
In pairs they walk by
Obedient
With warped logic
So untrue it becomes an illness
Eating
Breeding
Consuming their last rights
Good work it sounds nice when you read it out loud. yes i actually did that lol. their are a very few people in this world that think of life as a gift and to cherish it to look at it with care. many walk the streets and could care less of anything around them.
"With forgetful eyes
True to their nature
They pay no mind"
the people walk with no care any more and they are in their own worlds... its sad.
what i took out form what you wrote is two things Care More About the Environment and Stop Being So Blind.
its nice to have morals at the end of thigs.
Great Work!
I am not sure I fully agree with the actual message of this, but I do like the work itself. The simplicity coupled with the power of your emotional conviction makes it beautiful.
I am familiar with the thought of humans like robots. And old man hardened by society, a young man emptied by war, a woman's soul destroyed by one of those men. But in pairs? I'm not really sure if I see them in pairs... other than corrupted businessmen walking together perhaps....