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    dots Submission Name: A Clouded October Skydots
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    Author: Sirbongatron
    ASL Info:    19/M/NC
    Elite Ratio:    4.74 - 19/18/21
    Words: 186
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 63
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    dotsA Clouded October Skydots
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    Poison drips upon her lips
    As his quivering hand carves her name;
    Crimson in his hips.
    Once entwined in love divine
    Their fear of hope rests in time

    She shrouds herself in mystery;
    Stained glass—melting with gothic tendency.
    Wings broken, by those held dear
    Angelic light dims with fear.
    A vagrant soul in search of love,
    Though she fails to see his weeping,
    Sallow feathered dove.

    A tear stained letter riddled with hate
    A memory—for him—to never abate.
    Black and white razors,
    Scars on the mind; dreams of death unkind.

    And crimson streams serpentine,
    In five.
    Sweet.
    And.
    Simple.
    Lines.

    A grin across his tear stained face
    As black rivers run dry on hers.
    Erase this void, this vacuum of space.
    They each crave that first embrace
    That simple high of poignant love.
    Gift of light, from those above.

    Under an October moon—her tears paint
    His lonely tomb
    With dreams and hope
    And things he’d do.
    Their clocks had always beat in tune.
    But no more. No more.
    The shadows say as they caress
    Her skin, now gray.




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