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    dots Submission Name: In my arms. (I will wait for you forever)dots
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    Author: amanda99737
    ASL Info:    15/Girl/Alaska
    Elite Ratio:    1.74 - 11/33/56
    Words: 169
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Longing
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    dotsIn my arms. (I will wait for you forever)dots
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    I will wait for you forever. As long as it takes to have you in my arms. Oh, I hurt and I bleed how badly I need you here with me.

    How long I've waited for you. How long I've waited for this moment to be my last.

    Silver clouds surround me. Kiss me lovely. Toss a rose for me on my resting place. Oh how I am going to miss you. I will never see your face again.

    If I die tomorrow, I i die yesterday. Oh I will wait for you forever. How much I hurt how much I bleed I need you here with me.

    Can you see this ghost with these tears? Will you kiss them away? Along with all my fears? Oh, I need you here with me, right by my side. How much more can i hurt? How much more can i bleed?

    I need you here in my arms. I will wait for you forever.




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      wow......that was REALLY STRONG.......good job.......it made me think a lot........i made a lot of connections just by reading this........well, keep up the good work
    | Posted on 2008-08-02 00:00:00 | by Blackphoenix14 | [ Reply to This ]


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