Like i stated to someone before (I've been on a commenting spree) I really dislike rhyming sort of poems from those who write on Elite Skills, considering the majority that I've read are usually unbearably repetitive.(though there are some out there that i really like but i have to look like crazy to find something relatively interesting)
But this poem, i honestly love this, it sort of reminds me of the songs we use to sing when we were younger,
"What a crying shame
What a crying shame
There's no one left to play your game"
This is the part im speaking of, it's more of an adult sing along song sort of thing, if im making any sense which im starting to doubt...
I love the way this is set up, your words don't clash (thank god) Over all this is a really kick ass poem. I'm sorry that im being constructive towards this.