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    dots Submission Name: sucking at marriagedots
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    Author: darkonesgirl
    ASL Info:    21/f/sc
    Elite Ratio:    3.32 - 233/245/125
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotssucking at marriagedots
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    are you missing me
    as much as i am you
    are you thinking of me
    does it bring a tear to your eye
    do you regret your words
    as much as i do mine
    a lot of things were said
    that were not true
    how do you take that back
    can two years really be thrown away
    can this marriage really end like that
    should i cry myself to sleep at night
    would that help
    how do you initiate love
    during a hate fight
    am i really that bad of a wife
    that all you want to do is argue




    Submitted on 2008-07-03 17:48:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i think this was a good self-reflation ../. well keep up the good work ../.

    as an artist we have to put are life on the line Aand thats what you didi here ...i love it

    bloodstone
    | Posted on 2008-07-04 00:00:00 | by Bloodstone | [ Reply to This ]


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