simplicity of love -------------------------------------------
on the journey
is where descriptions come to light
we caught "no" as a hostage, rather gallantly
became blind to it's insistence
we are the children of almost always land
and then, love has a way of entering
when we leave the slightest gap
in the door, peering through innocence
weaving two souls and hearts
who share simple pieces of time
the same face we turn toward God
no different than the one that shines
in our lover's eyes
this is so wonderful, truly wonderful the love without reason. Everything is just like it is.... we cannot influence anything we just can hope that our lover responds. This inspiriting poem is beautiful without wanting.
I find the first stanza intrigueing... I love how you paint a picture of growth - towards enlightenment hopefully where there is only affirmation through positive thinking... hence making the word 'no' obselete, an unkown concept...
Love enters almost unnoticed and for me the concept of 'love is blind' is portrayed in the second stanza... not so much making the wrong choice but trusting blindly and giving freely of yourself...
The simplicity and power of the last stanza, how it is so very true when and where love decides to come knocking; we will never know. This piece to me shows that you should always keep your minds eye open to the endless possibilities out there, never putting up walls that may block that one slight chance a mate for your soul comes around. Very touching and beautiful. Thank you for sharing this with us.