Trapped, is yet another great poem from you,
You are a powerful writer and I enjoy the flow you put into them all (easy to follow) would like to see a heavier response with the emotions,
and maybe some rhyme in some of the pieces I have read so far. all in all I like your work, nice one.
This could really turn into one heck of a powerful write with just a little more emotion and maybe some added true life experiences
Its a Great start but finishes way to quickly to completely capture the readers mind
If you decide to add more to this Please let me know I would Love to read it
Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
Thank You
God Bless
Ron
Submission Name: Trapped.
