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    dots Submission Name: Lies after Liesdots
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    Author: Jaiknob
    Elite Ratio:    2.43 - 17/17/10
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsLies after Liesdots
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    When I cry tonight Know it's not 'cuz of you It's no longer you I've been betrayed and slayed Now left on the floor When I cry tonigt Know it's not 'cuz you're not here Know that I've moved on I can cry about other matters Know that the tears flow and Although I say it's not you anymore Deep down inside I hold on to the heart you never took bak I hold on to your heart still And just like Lies after Lies, Tears after Tears, Slayed n Betrayed, we all walk behind Masks...




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      u shud of put this as lyrics. it wud be an awsum song. i know a gud acapella band called 'intoxication'. they just might want to sing to sing ur song.

    the band 'INTOXICATION' consist of fana,gill & tisdale.

    im their manager.
    | Posted on 2008-09-26 00:00:00 | by geekyslacker | [ Reply to This ]


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