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    dots Submission Name: Mad.dots
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    Author: dismal_s child
    ASL Info:    17/F/Florida
    Elite Ratio:    3.19 - 325/317/125
    Words: 179
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
    Total Views: 75
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1299



    Description:
       I want to party!
    lol
    A work in progress.


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    dotsMad.dots
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    We're all mad here

    the pawns of love.
    the suck ups.
    your little blood sucker.
    all night fucker.


    Little babies grow big
    The world changes
    Days grow short
    Nights get long

    Mindless love army
    Mindless conformist
    Fall in line
    Fall in love.

    Mad as a Hatter.

    Brittney spears girls
    Become Gothic barbies.
    I got a freak tied up

    Let loose
    Dance
    Dance
    Dance

    Crazy Eyed
    Drunk Songs,
    Sweat Mingles with perfume

    Can’t tell me to stop.
    I gotta Dance.
    I gotta write.
    I gotta be there.
    Be there.

    Come on baby.
    Can’t tie me down.
    Let’s Play?

    Let’s burn this shit
    Let our spark
    Leak into a wild fire.

    Waited all my life..
    To lay here with you
    The faces were never clear.
    But now the focus clears.
    And your lips bring me back
    Back to dancing naked
    across my rug.

    I brought you into who you are.
    You brought me this far
    I’m on edge
    Let’s Plunge.

    Play…Mad little kittens.




    Submitted on 2008-07-04 02:26:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      my Angel,

    you write so well...

    don't worry about your Duckie.

    | Posted on 2008-07-05 00:00:00 | by ruejacobs | [ Reply to This ]


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