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    dots Submission Name: Thoughts That Won't Stopdots
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    Author: Crestfallenman
    ASL Info:    21/M/CA
    Elite Ratio:    4.7 - 593/817/331
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
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    dotsThoughts That Won't Stopdots
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    I looked up at the sky today,
    And I saw that it was cloudy.


    But beyond those dark shades of gray,
    I find a heaven so close to me.



    If the essence of are hopes move on,
    And the feelings that we reside with sulk deep,
    Would we always be accompanied by those who have gone,
    Tell me, is there life beyond our eternal sleep.





    Submitted on 2008-07-04 04:47:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      There most definately is life after we pass on my Friend
    That you can count on
    Think about it for a second
    The Human body is so profound and so well put together I believe it would be impossible to just fade away at death
    Remember every human body has a soul and that soul carries Living energy
    Its impossible for that energy to disintegrate so in effect there is proof of life after Death
    Its all about the Energy (soul) carrying us
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2008-07-04 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]


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