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    dots Submission Name: Matter ofdots
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    Author: Thinkingofyou
    ASL Info:    18/f/The sunny state
    Elite Ratio:    2.83 - 283/423/132
    Words: 60
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 640
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    Bytes: 365



    Description:
       My best friend tried to commit suicide, he called me as he was laying in his room convulsing and about to die. I called someone who new his address and called 911. If it wasn't for me picking up his phone call when no one else wanted to, he would of died. Yet everyone seems to think I had no part in him living for the simple fact that I couldn't visit him in the hospital.
    People are messed up.


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    dotsMatter ofdots
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    It's a matter of who got here first
    And how they cried when they heard
    How many hours they waited
    And who they apologized to
    It's not a matter of who called
    And who cared enough to listen
    How many hours they sat in silence
    And who they called and told
    It's a matter of what looks good on paper.




    Submitted on 2008-07-04 16:18:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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