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    dots Submission Name: Blood Lustdots
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    Author: sapphyreravyn
    ASL Info:    16/F/TX
    Elite Ratio:    1.54 - 3/13/20
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Poetry/Cutting or Mutilation
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    dotsBlood Lustdots
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    Oh what I wouldn't give
    To feel that shiny metal
    Against my bare skin.
    It calls to me
    Even now.
    I struggle to control it,
    This lust to see blood
    That is my own.
    Overriding my senses
    Making me lose myself
    I forget my life
    To welcome my death.
    Those I love
    Are gone to me now.
    Just me and my blade
    My greatest pal.




    Submitted on 2008-07-04 22:07:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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