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    dots Submission Name: Anthonydots
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    Author: twistedchick
    ASL Info:    17/girlie/United Kingdom
    Elite Ratio:    1.89 - 14/39/52
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 75
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 617



    Description:
       Inspired by my boyfriend Anthony hence the title.


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    dotsAnthonydots
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    Somebody wants you

    Somebody somewhere needs you

    Somebody dreams about you every night

    That somebody is me
    You caught my heart
    when you looked me in the eyes
    I swear im in heaven when you kiss me
    I repeat those three words over and over again.
    They mean so much yet there not enough
    300 miles feels like an ocean
    I love you more then I know
    I never knew i'd feel this way
    YOu asked me if i would wait for you
    I tell you that htere is no one in the world I'd rather spend my life with then you.




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