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    dots Submission Name: cliché.death.love.dots
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    Author: Celeste J. Bell
    ASL Info:    21/Lady/never-never land
    Elite Ratio:    3.97 - 208/204/66
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
    Total Views: 89
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 438



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       Rest in peace David Heaton.

    I love you uncle Dave. We all miss you.


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    Through red eyes I watch the world crack--
    Split
    And disolve into dust beneath us.

    They move slowly
    As if this haze burdens their limbs
    As well as their hearts.
    I hold no words for my father
    Grieving his brother.
    I give no wisdom to the son crying for his father
    The mother longing for her son.

    I share no comforts, for I too lost him as well.




    Submitted on 2008-07-06 02:37:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Weird story, My friend just got married a month ago tomorrow. When we were almost done with the reception he got the call that his uncle had beefed it on his bike on the way there and died.

    When he was going through the papers from the tables he noticed his aunt and cousins has written their names the date and "Good times".

    I have yet to lose an uncle, but the emotion here did make a personal connection.
    | Posted on 2008-07-06 00:00:00 | by nicodemous | [ Reply to This ]



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