well...this is like me commenting on my own page again....yet.....for all those who come here and wonder why I've posted a message to nicodemous on this page....I did that accidently and remember having deleted it thereafter, very well....but for some reason, it's popped up back here...and can't be deleted now!
Thanks, Nicodemous for your kind and thoughtful comments on my poem "Thirsty Crow"..
...My mom says that I had written it when I was still younger( so I must correct the description of the poem )...unfortunately we did not record it and so, some stanzas are missing ..as this is all of it that I can recall................I'm glad that u liked it, anyway.
I'll sure check out sum of your poetry...but when i get the time.....i havea pretty busy schedule & spend little time on this site.
Have a good day : )
This was pretty cool for only being 12. It is a bit juvenile but show a lot of promise. I could easily imagine this (with a little polishing and tweaking) in a children's book.
I have to say though talk about it as if it were so old. By my math it is only 2 years old. I have many poems (and some of my better works I might add) that are about as old as you if not a little older. But I am not so old I don't remember how long a year was when I was a teen. Once you hit like 20ish time no longer stands still, but races past you.