Description: This is something I found on a memo, which had been written over a year ago. So not much to describe - except i really don't know why the heck there is the last part... Well anyways i hope someone will like it.
Also I will hopefully get some nice feedback on how to make some progress into it from You. Thank you in advance.
A lone soldier -------------------------------------------
Clouds are moving
Rain is on it's way
Thunder 'n' lightning
Cracking the sky
There is light beyond
The hope for sun
In a circle we stare
Nature leashes flare
Of anger and sadness
Towards human madness
Machinery marching
'Gainst the order
Chaos is coming
A lone soldier
Hi there form afar and yet so near.
Love this short poem. Reminds me of my Army days – 26 years of it. I appreciate the loneliness of a soldier at arms with battle raging all around. Chaos - the senselessness of it. Yes - the madness of it. Still – the other guy opposite you may share your own uselessness but – confront we will and who will survive?
A lone soldier who found the Light behind the Sun – the Son. Will comment more - later. Regards, Joachim.
Submission Name: A lone soldier
