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    dots Submission Name: This day in InterwebHistory;dots

    Author: Thinkingofyou
    ASL Info:    18/f/The sunny state
    Elite Ratio:    2.83 - 283/423/132
    Words: 125
    Class/Type: Personal Quotes/Romance
    Total Views: 667
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       I asked my current boyfriend out, he really is wonderful and I'm finally happy and comfortable.

    Trevor Farr is amazing.<3

    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsThis day in InterwebHistory;dots

    I would like to have in writing.
    But text on a glowing screen works fine too.

    I have found a person who I long for.
    Who I find myself wanting all the time.
    Someone who makes me smile,
    And laugh all at the same time.
    Who doesn't judge my bad habits.
    And someone who doesn't tell me to change.
    I found a man who, barely 18,
    Who makes me feel like my first love once did.
    Three years ago.

    I'm not saying that I have found love.
    No, nothing of the sort actually.
    Only that I've found someone who I desire.
    And enjoying spending loads of time with.

    And this childish reading is only the beginning,
    of a chapter stuffed novel.

    Submitted on 2008-07-06 17:58:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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