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    dots Submission Name: Angelicdots

    Author: Jengrr
    ASL Info:    20/McBain
    Elite Ratio:    5.85 - 95/104/22
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    I wish to be an angel,
    Floating high on gossamer wings
    To dive into the silken pool of night
    And swim with stars
    To ride the sunís golden ferris wheel through the cool,
    Tumbling color sky
    To dance on mortal notes and twirl upon
    Crystalline symphonies

    Look close and see them swing from popcorn clouds
    Dangling their feet to brush the mountaintops
    Hear their childish glee in every ocean wave
    As if dainty feet tiptoe through puddles Leaving ripples behind

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