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    dots Submission Name: Lost Without My Sensesdots
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    Author: Crestfallenman
    ASL Info:    21/M/CA
    Elite Ratio:    4.7 - 593/819/331
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 54
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    Bytes: 627



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    dotsLost Without My Sensesdots
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    Moments drift silently,
    I daze off into my space.
    Lone with the beach setting sun,
    I can remember the times so peaceful.
    The road where you raised me from,
    A road where we both began.

    You selected me from a crowd,
    Held me every night to bed.
    Didn't give up the battle for me,

    I realise before me,
    That love was the best thing you gave me.
    You gave me a place in your heart,
    And poured yours out to give me a life.
    If only words could have been better,
    Before this divide of our lives.






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