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    dots Submission Name: Piggiesdots
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    Author: Localfreak
    ASL Info:    37, Maybe, Here
    Elite Ratio:    5.37 - 131/123/76
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 1119
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 804



    Description:
       Either this is the origin of a popular rhyme or something I made up for a giggle.
    Either way it's here.


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    dotsPiggiesdots
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    This little piggy
          ^ ^
         (*o*)
    went to market
    Sold this little piggy
          ^ ^
         (*o*)
    as Ham

    This little piggy
          ^ ^
         (*o*)
    had roast pork
    So this little piggy
          ^ ^
         (*o*)
    was gone

    This little piggy
         ^ ^
         (*o*)
    went
    AAAARRRGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    'cause he saw what the others had done

    The End




    Submitted on 2008-07-07 15:00:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I love this alternate nursery rhyme, maybe a Brothers Grimm take on it, lol.

    I love when people are clever with either wordplay or using an existing base and making something original out of it.

    this gave me a good chuckle, good job mate


    Darren
    | Posted on 2009-01-09 00:00:00 | by dax | [ Reply to This ]
      Hahahahahahaha. Hilarious. I love it. This is going on my favs. It's definately my favorite version.

    The Bird
    | Posted on 2009-01-08 00:00:00 | by Swimming Bird | [ Reply to This ]


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