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    dots Submission Name: into our mirrored junglesdots
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    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194/328/300
    Words: 164
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsinto our mirrored junglesdots
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    & hope may brighten
    the shadowed heart.
    & you,
    busted the way that you are,
    mismanage all of your dreams
    in piles near the bed.

    i've seen you,
    running through your sleep
    with vivid, button eyes
    vibrating
    their twitch
    into your scene.

    my static hands
    could consume you,
    if only
    for a lifetime
    of wet pursuits
    into our mirrored jungles.

    my mouth
    is a spot
    to cataglott.

    under high superstitious ceilings,
    sleep is a frightful rock.
    a dungeon of paradise
    where i find my old self
    waiting for me.

    the head floats by the ankles.
    i feel the bare room
    trembling yellow in its labors.

    busted souls traveling
    through the world at this hour
    get recycled
    & a little less desperate.
    like the difference between god
    & bad information

    i wish everything slender of flower.
    i wish gray light turning green
    on dazzling snows...




    Submitted on 2008-07-07 22:14:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Ooo, this was great. I really like all your poems but this is my favourite. Only thing is I don't like how you started the whole thing with "and". I dunno, throws me off a little. But other then that fantastic!
    | Posted on 2008-08-03 00:00:00 | by kickit | [ Reply to This ]
      I really like everything about this except for the & symbols. I really hate symbols in poetry, but I'm sure that's just a personal preference. Other than that, I'm thoroughly enjoying your work! ^_^
    | Posted on 2008-07-14 00:00:00 | by Mandi Gayle | [ Reply to This ]


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