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    dots Submission Name: Herdots
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    Author: vedanta19
    Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 492/502/133
    Words: 172
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsHerdots
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    Her -
    the titled verse
    sometimes meaningless, sometimes pierced
    right through a heart;

    Her -
    a small town girl,
    trusting all -
    you, me and the devils in us,
    such naivity, such purity -
    so rare heart;

    Her -
    keeping to herself, on a impossible goal
    walking, almost stumbling -
    a cursed path
    trying to reach somewhere, making own bloods -
    proud,
    such a fruitless attempt -
    suicidal;

    Her -
    suppressed dreams, confused mind
    walking right?
    or
    walking sly?
    such dilemma
    such going under in a tunnel -
    nightmares on early morn
    restless, wine-drown midnights;

    Her -
    searching, finding, disappointing
    temporary
    pillow to rest tears -
    Him
    like
    odd jobs on soul-less saturdays
    underpaid, a compromise;

    silence - a deathbed
    inviting, cosy
    to rest
    undream - just sleep
    do you know that feeling?

    where she rests -
    undreaming, such silence,
    unloved, misunderstood
    like
    caged bird in unfree shops
    selling cheap, making trade
    look smart;

    do you know
    Her?





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