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    dots Submission Name: Just Wanna Do Youdots
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    Author: daughterofdeath
    ASL Info:    18/F/West Virginia
    Elite Ratio:    4.88 - 253/248/195
    Words: 230
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Longing
    Total Views: 81
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1404



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    dotsJust Wanna Do Youdots
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    Do you think it's wrong
    That I just want your body.
    Cause I don't think so
    I know that you want me.
    I can tell because
    I can read all of your signs
    But you don't just tell me,
    You make me read between the lines.

    Then you tell me to come over your place
    And we both know just what were gonna do.
    Some people may think that I'm crazy,
    But deep down I just wanna do you.

    I would never admit it
    But I just cant resist you.
    You're just too confident
    And I want to feel something new.
    Whatever you ask me
    I just can't tell you no.
    I need you to touch me
    Cause my body tells me so.

    Then you tell me to come over your place
    And we both know just what were gonna do.
    Some people may think that I'm crazy,
    But deep down I just wanna do you.

    I wanna feel your hands
    Over my skin.
    I wanna wake up from
    This dream I've been in.
    Release the stress
    That I've been through.
    Boy right now
    I wanna be with you. (x2)

    Then you tell me to come over your place
    And we both know just what were gonna do.
    Some people may think that I'm crazy,
    But deep down I just wanna do you.





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    ||| Comments |||
      Forgive me but I did not really like the subject of your discourse...I wish I could comment but my hands would rather not...

    I do not mean it though in a disrespectful way. Just that the subject of the poem is something I cannot discuss about positively coz of my faith.

    Sex is not a thing to be done just like that coz of a feeling, it can be more special, sweeter. A great person said the "greatest sex is between a man and woman who are bound together by marriage" and he gave his credible reasons for it...things like trust, confidence..etc

    well...those are my thoughts.

    God bless,
    Joel
    | Posted on 2008-08-26 00:00:00 | by nevender | [ Reply to This ]


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