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    dots Submission Name: WHY!!!dots
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    Author: essence of life
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    dotsWHY!!!dots
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    Damnit all! I don't know why but it seems to always happen.

    I fall in love then.... I wonder why was I chosen?

    We seem too different but lets u chose me.

    I always wonder why do i love u and u love me?

    I ask but your answer doesn't satify me I should be happy you chose me but..... WHY!!!




    Submitted on 2008-07-08 06:30:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Meh, screw the structure. Does there really have to be a reason? for god's sake lil man enjoy yourself before that question puts too much weight on something so fragile. with love

    ~Nikki
    | Posted on 2010-02-01 00:00:00 | by nikita2u | [ Reply to This ]
      hmmm, interesting, personally i think the rhyming was a little weak, maybe a little too forced. I can sympathize though.
    | Posted on 2009-03-15 00:00:00 | by April1Angel | [ Reply to This ]
      Just needs a little bit of spellcheck, ok ess?
    All in all, it was a good poem.

    ~Carrie
    | Posted on 2008-11-11 00:00:00 | by dismal_s child | [ Reply to This ]


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