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    dots Submission Name: Not Okaydots
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    Author: BlazeFlamme
    ASL Info:    22/m/TX
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 23/160/138
    Words: 122
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 691
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsNot Okaydots
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    I'm falling fast
    Please save me
    Since you went away
    I'm not okay

    I need your touch
    To feel you close
    What can I say
    I'm not okay

    My heart is crumpled
    It's felt empty for awhile
    Every day
    I'm not okay

    I feel you slip further
    Each time I check
    You're one more step away
    I'm not okay

    You glanced back at me
    I could tell you miss it too
    I wish you would stay
    I'm not okay

    He's blinded you, you see
    Turn around and look at me
    Now alone I lay
    I'm not okay

    You should come home
    Your place is with me
    Your gone and I'm afraid
    That I'll never be okay




    Submitted on 2008-07-08 07:38:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This has a sort of commercial quality without being campy. I could easily imagine these words being the lyrics to a hit song. This is simple enough that you can get a scene of the raw honesty behind it.
    | Posted on 2008-07-08 00:00:00 | by nicodemous | [ Reply to This ]


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