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Author: GoKart Mozart
Elite Ratio:    5.47 - 131 /93 /49
Words: 23
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
Total Views: 909
Average Vote:    5.0000
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i love this one :]

i made it a bit bigger for this site...

the original was:

If You Listen, You Can Hear Your Name In The Beat Of My Heart.

i still like that one, too :]


If You Listen Closely

You Can Hear Your Name

In My Every Breath

And Every Beat

Of My Heart.

Submitted on 2008-07-08 08:43:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Simple, raw. Short can be (and in this case is) a bounus.
| Posted on 2008-07-08 00:00:00 | by nicodemous | [ Reply to This ]
  Well this one is simply perfect and short and sweet combined. What more can I say:)

| Posted on 2008-07-08 00:00:00 | by wickedwoman | [ Reply to This ]

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