make sure you leave a comment
make me vomit
closer to the argument
is......
the intent of comments,in poetry rooms
err...i mean,poetry tombs
is it to uplift or create?
or a chance to hate and degrade?
what is the point of leaving a comment
if your thoughts werent really on it,the poem?
love this room?i never did
closer to a baby's crib
most comments are fibs
no talent people and no ad-libs
the commenter gives his/her critque
most usually bleak,from some blue haired freak
they're just trying,to run you off
to this i am positive
poetry rooms have become low end people
lets let the law look at this |
Submission Name: this could be anywhere
