This is very true, we tend to grow up so fast without noticing it at al, why, it seems that just few months ago I was still in grade school. We all get caught up in trying to be older, that when we do get to be older, its not what we exspected, and the times that we don't want to face, we see are closer to us.
For me, its hard, cause i want to grow up, but i know, that growing up comes with responisblitys that I don't think I can handdle.
You did well, your poem is simple, and the words spoken clearly. its perfect.
This was very good. I normally write more in a comment, but I'm at a loss. I don't think this can be improved further, it expresses a point well and doesn't feel contrived.
I was getting the idea that we grow up quickly and forgot what it was like when we were young, which often leads to us treating the young like we were never young, like they're annoying and need to grow up. The whole time we pursue our youth we forget we ever had one.
The only thing,
"Morphous time transforms them into tomorrow"
The definition of morphous is "having a specified shape or form" and I couldn't tell if that's what you intended, or if you intended amorphous (lacking definite shape). I can pick up a different meaning depending on which word you meant.
and a minor typo, if you care,
"Wondering all the wile" last word missing its h, "while"
I almost cried. I have been thinking a lot about this topic recently. And this just hit me in the emotion. I don't know if that makes sense.
I like how this is short and simple. Yet, it is also elegant and gets to the point. That being that when we are children we are in a hurry to grow up. Then we are adults and we don't care about the childhood that kids are living now. We are too worried about losing out own childhood, to give a care about other youth.
Submission Name: Tomorrow Forgot Yesterday
