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Are You Peeking Yet?

Author: Peggy Paris
ASL Info:    61/F/USA
Elite Ratio:    4.11 - 747 /570 /167
Words: 123
Class/Type: Poetry /Comedy
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Are You Peeking Yet?

Somewhere between boxers and strings,
a level of comfort exists.
Too baggy? They fall.
Too stringy? They crawl.
I'm sure that you're on to my gist.

With jeans slung down low,
those boxers do show;
the sight makes me giggle no end.

Or maybe the string
on some sexy, young thing
gets all muddy stuck up her rear end.

In any event, my thoughts won't relent
as I laugh at extremes gone awry;
but it's really a joke
I just dare not poke
for the victims would probably cry.

The fashion patrol has a permanent role
in keeping us spending our dough;
but I'd never guess there'd be such success
in getting so many to show!

Submitted on 2008-07-08 16:35:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This wqas written very well. I laughed quite a bit. The fashion of young people these days is weird. Though I am young myself... lol Great job. Keep up the nice work, and I'll keep reading

| Posted on 2008-07-09 00:00:00 | by MinervaBlu | [ Reply to This ]
  Us guys will always be checking you lovely gals out, whatever you wear!

This was definitely giggle worthy, and a delight to read!
| Posted on 2008-07-08 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]

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