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    dots Submission Name: Are You Peeking Yet?dots
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    Author: Peggy Paris
    ASL Info:    61/F/USA
    Elite Ratio:    4.11 - 747/570/167
    Words: 123
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
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    dotsAre You Peeking Yet?dots
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    Somewhere between boxers and strings,
    a level of comfort exists.
    Too baggy? They fall.
    Too stringy? They crawl.
    I'm sure that you're on to my gist.

    With jeans slung down low,
    those boxers do show;
    the sight makes me giggle no end.

    Or maybe the string
    on some sexy, young thing
    gets all muddy stuck up her rear end.

    In any event, my thoughts won't relent
    as I laugh at extremes gone awry;
    but it's really a joke
    I just dare not poke
    for the victims would probably cry.

    The fashion patrol has a permanent role
    in keeping us spending our dough;
    but I'd never guess there'd be such success
    in getting so many to show!





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      This wqas written very well. I laughed quite a bit. The fashion of young people these days is weird. Though I am young myself... lol Great job. Keep up the nice work, and I'll keep reading

    »Haely«
    | Posted on 2008-07-09 00:00:00 | by MinervaBlu | [ Reply to This ]
      Us guys will always be checking you lovely gals out, whatever you wear!

    This was definitely giggle worthy, and a delight to read!
    | Posted on 2008-07-08 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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