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Love's sweet mementos of a long-lost time scatter rhyme upon the grounds of summer. Her kiss, remembered past its rendered night, stills floats a vision--- and I surrender. My fingertips retrace her curves; within my mind, I do observe her flowing hair and perfect smile--- returning there to bask awhile. Though passion's notes on moistened lips once hummed, love succumbed to summer's drought drawn withered. A torn and shattered man remained to write of autumn's leaves and love blown far from sight. My eyes grow swollen, full of tears--- farewell to summer's yesteryear. Fall's leaves break free and so will I--- but not without this sad goodbye. |
Happy and sad this was. I was roaming this evening looking for something that was just moving. I found it here. Fall's leaves break free and so will I---but not without this sad goodbye. Very descriptive and relates well to each line. Thank you for your gift sharing. Write on! Kuuipo | Posted on 2009-04-01 00:00:00 | by Kuuipo | [ Reply to This ] | Sharon | You did it again my Friend This is another write from you that left me with tears falling before it was even finished You certainly have a way of tugging ones heart with your words Very Sad Yes but Also Very Beautiful Looking forward to reading more soon God Bless Your Friend Ron | Posted on 2008-08-25 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ] | This was written cery well and very beautiful. The imagery was fantastic, the flow was unbroken, it was magnificent! I haven't any thing to nitpick. Keep up the awesome work, and I'll keep reading | »Haely« | Posted on 2008-07-09 00:00:00 | by MinervaBlu | [ Reply to This ] | Parting is such sweet sorrow, or so they say! This was sad and wonderful! Love is never truly lost, though it may be in its physical form! It lingers forever in memories that form part of the fabric that covers the heart, and keeps it warm in the soul's winters! | | Posted on 2008-07-08 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ] | |