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Jumbled Thoughts

Author: Peggy Paris
ASL Info:    61/F/USA
Elite Ratio:    4.11 - 747 /570 /167
Words: 62
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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Jumbled Thoughts

Thoughts go flying far asunder---
Some adverse as war's own plunder.
Few agree and none affirm;
Yet, they season grown to term.

Animosity is born
Nurtured from a plea, forlorn.
Some accept its bitter taste,
Though authentic, still's a waste.

Minds attracted to such pacts
May adhere to misused facts.
What's authentic, plain, or real
Breathes astonishing appeal!

Submitted on 2008-07-08 16:40:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Ah, a most excellent and musical piece of poetry, finely thoughout and very deftly done! Loved it! bravo... bravo... bravo...
| Posted on 2008-07-25 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]
  And, the truth shall out and triumph (or would we hope that it would)! This gets to the heart of an argument albeit so short. Just goes to show that a little can mean a lot!!
| Posted on 2008-07-08 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]

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