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    dots Submission Name: Jumbled Thoughtsdots
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    Author: Peggy Paris
    ASL Info:    61/F/USA
    Elite Ratio:    4.11 - 746/567/167
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsJumbled Thoughtsdots
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    Thoughts go flying far asunder---
    Some adverse as war's own plunder.
    Few agree and none affirm;
    Yet, they season grown to term.

    Animosity is born
    Nurtured from a plea, forlorn.
    Some accept its bitter taste,
    Though authentic, still's a waste.

    Minds attracted to such pacts
    May adhere to misused facts.
    What's authentic, plain, or real
    Breathes astonishing appeal!





    Submitted on 2008-07-08 16:40:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Ah, a most excellent and musical piece of poetry, finely thoughout and very deftly done! Loved it! bravo... bravo... bravo...
    | Posted on 2008-07-25 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]
      And, the truth shall out and triumph (or would we hope that it would)! This gets to the heart of an argument albeit so short. Just goes to show that a little can mean a lot!!
    | Posted on 2008-07-08 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]



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