ALL THAT SHALL EVER BE

Author: Peggy Paris ASL Info:    61/F/USA Elite Ratio:    4.11 - 747 /570 /167 Words: 74

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ALL THAT SHALL EVER BE

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Piercing screams from a shattered past Bleeding wounds that forever last Fitful dreams and uneasy sleep Horror's realm full of tears to weep Deep regrets caught in awful lies Buried hopes, unrelenting sighs Passion dead in its stone cold tomb Fathered lust in a growing womb Answers lost in a question's plea Questions all that shall ever be

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This almost comes across as clues to a riddle... That if you can decipher the meaning of each stanza it will unfold in a tragic and ancient secret... It took me on a relic hunt through cobweb covered rooms with creaking doors and leather bound books that snap shut with a thud and a layer of dust floating up... Beautifully crafted!

| Posted on 2008-08-19 00:00:00 | by Beulah | [ Reply to This ]

Sharon This write reminded me of just what Ive been missing not visiting your page for so long I sincerelly apologize for that I have been sick and so has my Mom and little sister We are finally feeling better and Life once again shines Now back to your write As with all your writes this one shines with pure and honest emotion You have a Great knack of drawing the reader in with your words to your life or to the subject of your poems life This write I found to be very sad and the rhyme scheme was very well done To be Honest even though I am male I saw a lot of my own life in this and this brought back memories of a sad and troublesome past that was mine but this also showed me how Grateful I am by coming as far as I have in life and escaping from the pain Excellent Job!!!!!!! Im making this another favorite from you Please keep in touch I Honestly miss talking to you God Bless Your Friend Ron

| Posted on 2008-08-07 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]

Straight to the heart! Love it! Instantly part of it

| Posted on 2008-08-04 00:00:00 | by lily21 | [ Reply to This ]

I love minimalistic pieces like this because they are so powerful and thought provoking. I had an awful nightmare the other night and even though I can't remember the dream I was filled with an awful feeling all the next day! Hope all is well! love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share tif ~*~

| Posted on 2008-07-16 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]

This was written very well. Short, but it got the point I cross. I espeically love it because I can relate. Keep up the fantastic work and I'll keep reading »Haely«

| Posted on 2008-07-09 00:00:00 | by MinervaBlu | [ Reply to This ]

This is really deep for such a short verse! It is excellent, and touches the myriad of nightmares generated by a past mistake! Heaven help us, we all make them, and they all have their unrelenting consequences!! Well done, lovely lady!

| Posted on 2008-07-08 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]

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