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Author: Peggy Paris
ASL Info:    61/F/USA
Elite Ratio:    4.11 - 747 /570 /167
Words: 74
Class/Type: Poetry /Dark
Total Views: 1463
Average Vote:    5.0000
Bytes: 542



Piercing screams
from a shattered past
Bleeding wounds
that forever last

Fitful dreams
and uneasy sleep
Horror's realm
full of tears to weep

Deep regrets
caught in awful lies
Buried hopes,
unrelenting sighs

Passion dead
in its stone cold tomb
Fathered lust
in a growing womb

Answers lost
in a question's plea
Questions all
that shall ever be

Submitted on 2008-07-08 16:55:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This almost comes across as clues to a riddle...

That if you can decipher the meaning of each stanza it will unfold in a tragic and ancient secret...

It took me on a relic hunt through cobweb covered rooms with creaking doors and leather bound books that snap shut with a thud and a layer of dust floating up...

Beautifully crafted!
| Posted on 2008-08-19 00:00:00 | by Beulah | [ Reply to This ]
This write reminded me of just what Ive been missing not visiting your page for so long
I sincerelly apologize for that
I have been sick and so has my Mom and little sister
We are finally feeling better and Life once again shines
Now back to your write
As with all your writes this one shines with pure and honest emotion
You have a Great knack of drawing the reader in with your words to your life or to the subject of your poems life
This write I found to be very sad and the rhyme scheme was very well done
To be Honest even though I am male I saw a lot of my own life in this and this brought back memories of a sad and troublesome past that was mine but this also showed me how Grateful I am by coming as far as I have in life and escaping from the pain
Excellent Job!!!!!!!
Im making this another favorite from you
Please keep in touch I Honestly miss talking to you
God Bless
Your Friend
| Posted on 2008-08-07 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
  Straight to the heart! Love it! Instantly part of it
| Posted on 2008-08-04 00:00:00 | by lily21 | [ Reply to This ]
  I love minimalistic pieces like this because they are so powerful and thought provoking.

I had an awful nightmare the other night and even though I can't remember the dream I was filled with an awful feeling all the next day!

Hope all is well!

love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share
tif ~*~
| Posted on 2008-07-16 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
  This was written very well. Short, but it got the point I cross. I espeically love it because I can relate. Keep up the fantastic work and I'll keep reading

| Posted on 2008-07-09 00:00:00 | by MinervaBlu | [ Reply to This ]
  This is really deep for such a short verse! It is excellent, and touches the myriad of nightmares generated by a past mistake! Heaven help us, we all make them, and they all have their unrelenting consequences!!

Well done, lovely lady!
| Posted on 2008-07-08 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]

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